Saturday, 17 November 2012

Responses to feedback on pitch

What went well:

- Firstly my group really liked my idea, they told me they thought my synopsis was well thought out, I had made an effort into making it as original as I could but still making it based on popular TV programmes out that the moment. They liked the fact I had gone into detailed description when explaining not only what my two minute clip would be but also what I would do for a whole episode and even giving a brief series synopsis.
- They praised me on my visual mood board, they told me that it reflected my ideas well and that I had a clear vision of where I wanted to go with my production.
- My group liked the fact I had taken our research on board with creating an appealing synopsis for the programme, I had also bared in mind an easy location  to film at when deciding the location that my programme was set in.

What I could have improved on:

- In my pitch I had a lot to get through, in such little time. Unfortunately I didn't manage to explain my script or show my script to any other member of my group. The area that I need to improve on for this is my time management.
- I think what I could have done better was explaining more about how I intend to make my production more beneficially and targeted toward our target audience. I think I went into too much detail into the synopsis of the series and where I intend to go with the programme, information that wasn't relevant. This time could have being used for explained something far more beneficial to how I intend to target my audience and/or my script.  
 

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